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Wednesday, 22 May 2019

The Hook

There once was a dog. But he got lost while he was at the park with darrel, his dog owner. The dog was somewhere in the park Darrel called out but no bark was to be heard. But the real question is, was the dog even at the park. yes he was but there he was in a mysterious mans arms. Lucky jumped out to Darrel but the man grabbed him back as the dog barked. Darrel ran at him but then, poof the man disappered as Lucky dropped to the ground. Darrel picked him up then they went to the vet. the mysterious man was standing there starring at them. They ran out as the man followed.

1 comment:

  1. I think this story was very interesting and mysterious and it made me wonder what happened to the man? great job BESTIE

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