I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hey Nicky, this is very cool! Can you give a brief description of what this is about? I'm guessing it's about things that are important to you. What did you use to create your graphic? Whaea Vicki
This looks awesome, Nicky. I like that you chose a soccer ball, as I know you love Soccer! I can also see straight away the things that are most important to you and that contribute to your wellbeing. Like Vicki said, could you add a brief description to your blog post of what the challenge was, and maybe a link to the word cloud site so that people can see where you made this (they may want to make their own!)
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Nicky, this is very cool!
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Whaea Vicki
This looks awesome, Nicky. I like that you chose a soccer ball, as I know you love Soccer! I can also see straight away the things that are most important to you and that contribute to your wellbeing. Like Vicki said, could you add a brief description to your blog post of what the challenge was, and maybe a link to the word cloud site so that people can see where you made this (they may want to make their own!)
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