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Wednesday, 31 July 2019

1. Salva's uncle helps him overcome his fear by calming him down becuase Salva was scared and worried.
 I don't think so.
2. I think the desert was the worst element becuase he stubbed his toe and his toe nail came off. He also got tired and scared but his uncle helped him to get through it.
3. He points to some bushes and said hey see those bushes Salva we just need to get to them. do you think you can do that Salva.
Salva probably would have gone crazy and would've got scared and most probably eaten.
I don't understand this question.
4.  Don't take things for granted, appreciate what you've got.

Tuesday, 30 July 2019

1. The groups think that salva will waste food and water and slow them down. I feel bad for salva and annoyed becuase he is just a kid.
2. Water cantrols Nya's life becuase she has no choice about getting water for her family. My brain dictates my life becuase it controls everything I do.
3. Don't go towards the other Tribes. Birds can lead to honey. Don't go towards wild animals. I think that salva is doing great because when he is on his own he stays calm.
4. The lake camp shelter is horrible but she doesn't have to get water and walk for 8 hours. safety is way worse at the camp than it is her house.

Friday, 26 July 2019




















1.Salva is 11 years old he has three brothers arik, kuol, and ring. He has 2 sisters akit and agnath  and he is from the dinka tribe. there is the neur tribe which is like there enemies. I don't really think i'm like him.
2. where is my family. where am i going. when will i see them again. These three questions are what Salva said to himself in his mind.
3. I would think it would be horrible and preasured because she has to walk half a morning (8 hours) there and back. if she spills it she will have to go back. She has no shoes and she got a thorn stuck in her foot. She would have to carry a heavy water caintainer for 4 hours.
4. The Dinka tribe was his tribe so if someone had a v on there forehead and the Nuer tribe would have something else. I can't really tell cultures apart execpt when they have an accent.

Boatman


Once upon a time there was a boatman. Who went out fishing to try to get some food to eat for dinner. It was about midnight when he went out and no one was to be seen and no animals. He caught a fish and brought it home to eat it. But when got home there was a light on. And he thought he was dreaming because he is actually the only person in the world and everyone in the world was killed by something never seen by human eyes before. The thing that killed the whole world wiped out all the electricity and so the light should not be on. So the next he went fishing and then he thought if there is no animals how is there fish and eels and other sea animals. Then he thought to himself, maybe the thing only killed the land creatures. Maybe there are other people still alive but they were just under water when it happened so he went back to shore and started to look for people.
 But on his way there a shark came and knocked his boat over and so he tried getting back to shore but the shark came and was just about to eat him but then it stopped. The boatman wondered why it stopped and all the other fish and eels and other sea animals just vanished. Then he went back to shore with his light still on and wondered why the animals vanished and the land creatures. He went back out and it was morning he saw something in the distance and it was a human he swam to him or her but then he got stuck and got taken underwater by nothing and then he realized that his foot was stuck under a rock ugh he screamed as his mouth filled with water as he got killed by the other human. Then the person that killed him said bye bye boatman. But the person killed a different person not the boatman a free man. As he realized that he got struck from behind by the boatman.

And then he looked back at his house and the light was off and he thought the power went out but nope the power was on because he could just flick a switch and the light would come on. So then the boat man went for a trip to find other people but he found nobody. He looked again but this time he saw something moving he went over to see what it was. Then when he got there he saw nothing and then he heard creaking from behind he looked behind him but nothing. The sound was getting closer and closer but nothing was to be seen. Then bang a single gunshot was fired but from nowhere then the boatman realized there were wooden boards underneath his feet with little cracks. Then he saw a person when he saw her she ran from the wooden boards to house she lived in. He saw her go in there but she didn’t know that. The boatman went to the house then he heard gunshots he ran upstairs to see what it was but there was no body just blood. As he ran downstairs and out the door he saw shadow standing over the body in the lounge. The boatman was scared so he ran but knowing there was another person in the house so the next day he went to investigate the house. And it was clean and tidy with nothing or nobody to be seen no blood no nothing. Then he ran to the lounge but nothing.

He started to panic then he heard a noise coming from the attic. He went upstairs to see what the noise was but nothing was there but then he saw a shadow in the corner of the room. Bang the shadow tried to shoot the boatman but he missed the boatman ran downstairs and out the door, he ran to his house without looking back. The man followed him and the boatman didn’t know so the man creeped up to the door punched it down but no one was there he looked around and still no one. Ahhhhhhhhh from out of nowhere the boatman jumped from roof strangling him to death. Now knowing he was dead he could go back and look at the house. This time when he was upstairs he saw the body he ran up to her and she wasn’t dead she was bleeding out. The boatman didn’t know what to do. So he just ran to the nearby hospital and got some bandages and meds. When the boatman came back she was gone blood on the floor but no body. The boatman looked everywhere in the house but there was only blood. The boatman said oh well and left the house just laughing because the girl was stuffed without him so he just went home. Soon there was a knock at the door he opened it and the girl was standing there without a scratch no blood no wound no nothing. He thought it might twin sister or if he was just dreaming but it was the same girl from the house. He asked how you healed so fast. She didn’t reply so he asked again but no words would come out of her mouth so he just shut the door and went to sleep. Another knock he opened it it was someone else this time it was a boy.

Friday, 5 July 2019

Narrative Pick a Path

This term we have been learning about narrative writing. We also got to choose between animation or pick a path and I chose pick a path.



The Fortnite Revolution

What should I choose for my locker or should I randomize it? Hmmmm, I think I'm going to randomize it. Ok, I'm in the battle bus, where should I go I ask myself? I know I’m going to either go to Retail Row or Loot Lake. I'll go Loot Lake. Oh no! I just got shredded while I was landing. Bang! I sniped him with my heavy sniper after I landed. I go camp in a bush because I'm low on health. Many deaths later... Hmmm, should I stay here until there is not many people left or should I go look for meds? I think I’m going to go look for meds, shoot! I get sniped at. He rushes me and so then we end up in a build battle but I get a lucky shot and no-scope him 2 metres away with my heavy sniper.  So then it said in the kill feed donald345-cullen no-scoped player431.

 Luckily he had  meds for me and so I healed up and carried on trying to find someone to fight. I see someone and he does not see me. I am the sneaky main. Actually, I think I will just lay back. Many deaths later... Ok two more people. I can do this. Ok there is someone in a base and I don’t know where the other guy is. I think I'll push the guy in the base. Bang! 220 to the head! Shoot! How did I lose that much fall damage (97). Ok three hp and a dream. I just need to find meds so I can heal up and fight the other guy. Shoot! He’s pushing me but I have nothing to heal with. Oosh! There is a bush right here, I think I’ll just stay here until he goes away,
Ok cool, he’s gone. Maybe I could find some apples or mushrooms.

 Oh yes! The circle is ending at Moisty Mire there is heaps of mushrooms there. Ok, the last guy is just sitting in a base. Haha loser. I can just heal while he’s up there. Or should I push? Nah I won't push I will just heal up instead.
Ok, I think I’m gonna push him. Or I could keep camping actually nah stuff it I’m going to push him.
Bang! Bang! Bang! Finally I get a shot to him, 68 damage and then I hit him again for 12 In the head. Bang! He pumps me in the head. I have 11 health left Bang! I hit him for 100. So I do the math and that means he has 20 hp. Shoot I’m on 3 hp because the storm is pressuring me. Bang I shoot him for 5 and 14 and then bang I hit him for 220. Oh yes! my 150th solo win. Ok, what dance oh I think I will go with the most triggering dance laugh it up. Ok guess I'll just go back to the lobby. Ok, let's just start another game and get another win. Days later. Ohhhhh yes! 417 squad wins, 197 duo wins and 180 solo wins.

I learnt about pick a path and animation through out this term and I have been working on this at the start or June to early July and finished on 2nd of July. I had a great experiance learning about pick a path because I had never done it.